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Regarding the pants

Letzte Änderung: 01.01.2014
721 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Written in: August 2012

Junhong knows what to do to get what he wants.


I'm not sure I know what this is but it's all DaeJuns fault.
Blame her for everything.
~끝 kkeut~

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Von:  FaerieKanon
2014-01-02T12:20:54+00:00 02.01.2014 13:20
I dunno which language I should use now, so I'll just comment in English.
It's a very cute one shot and I enjoyed reading it a lot.
Only critizism is that it's unusual to use the present tense in stories. It would sound better if you used the past tense. But that's all.
I'm curious about other stories. ^-^
Antwort von:  Jaebabo
07.01.2014 20:06
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)
About the present tense: There are many stories out there (not only fanfiction but also books) that are written in present. Yes, most people use past tense -I normally do as well- but it's not that unusual to use present tense. ;)
And other stories will follow - there are more than enough. ;D