I dunno which language I should use now, so I'll just comment in English.
It's a very cute one shot and I enjoyed reading it a lot.
Only critizism is that it's unusual to use the present tense in stories. It would sound better if you used the past tense. But that's all.
I'm curious about other stories. ^-^
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)
About the present tense: There are many stories out there (not only fanfiction but also books) that are written in present. Yes, most people use past tense -I normally do as well- but it's not that unusual to use present tense. ;)
And other stories will follow - there are more than enough. ;D