Services of Love

What a great story; heart touching with all of these deep emotions. I love this depressive athmosphere, too. The words you let him said are so full of sadness. Your idea, that he have thought like this after hearing about the death of his beloved daughter - its very authentic. I love your story and your kind of farewell for him. Grest work!

Ich kann zwar nicht wirklch Englich, aber das was ich dank der Bablefish Übersetzung verstanden habe, ist echt traurig.

Eine traurige aber wundbar erzähle Kurzgeschichte!

You are creating quite a depressing atmosphere in this fanfiction and you are describing it so well that the reader can almost touch it! I myself can very well imagine that this could be the way the general would've reacted upon hearing of Oscar's death. Very well written, keep up the good work! :-)