Steel on steel

Hey, I'm not afraid of reading or writing english! xDD
Anyway, this one was awesome!! x3
Don't worry about your english, it was perfect! I was surprised as I read your comment at the end.
You can describe the emotions and the atmosphere very well, I just love it! <3
I think that was all I got to say^^
Hope you'll make more of those!

Tema

mh, ich schreib dir mal auf deutsch zurück, da du das ja zu verstehen scheinst (*rofl* XD) und ich grad überhaupt keinen kopf für englisch hab >D~
joa, ich wollt am anfang auch nich lesen, weil's eben englisch is..aber gut, dass ich's dann doch gemacht hab, is nämlich wirklich toll :3~
die traurigkeit der beiden kommt sehr schön rüber, und ich weiss nich, ob es an meinen mangelnden englisch-kenntnissen liegt, aber ich finde, dass es sich alles sehr flüssig und stimmig anhört .-. konnte keine fehler finden ^^ schreib bitte mehr zu fma ;o;

Wonderful!
For me, the thought that you wrote this whole thing in English needs to be respected (^^).
I'm somehow thankful to have read it, it's very emotional...
Somehow English texts scare me, really, but if I'm able to read the mangas, why not FF's?
I've never thought it's possible to write a FF just about an Moment, but you made it really well.

Wow, that was really amazing. It was written so wonderfully, and had a lot of emotion in it. I loved it. Keep up the good work!

Wow... It is really sad, but I loved this. You wrote so detailed about the two... I'm glad you chose english though it wasn't your mothertongue. This language is very impressive at times.
I really liked it, the picture of the Elric brothers sitting on the floor and holding each other just came too fast.

Seranita

I think I´m not the best to write a comment because my comments are never costruktive!
I can only tall my feelings about it and I`d like to cry now!
I`m not able to say why it has that power of emotions in this language... I´m happy I´ve read it!
THX!! Ev!!^^°