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I love you

"I love you!"
 

"I love you." These are three simply words but they are so important that some relationships can break of them.
 

"Don't go away! I don't want to hurt you! Wait please!"
 

"Let me go! I don't want to hear this shit!" she shouted.
 

"I-I can explain this! I don't want this!"
 

"No!! No! Just leave me alone!"
 

"Please baby, sweety. I love you. You know that! I was drunked an she ... I don't want that!"
 

"Why do you think I could stand this pain? Why? I want to believe you but I can't! You hurt me so often! Don't try to explain! I don't want to hear that lies!"
 

She ran out of the room where her boyfriend laid next to an unknown girl. Out of his house. Nobody noticed her and the party was still on. He tried to follow her into the rain.
 

"Baby please wait! Please!"
 

When she saw him she ran down the street to the bridge over the motorway. She climped over the parapet of the bridge.
 

"Don't come here! I'll jump!" There were tears in her eyes when she said this.
 

"What's that Fuck? You'll never jump! Don't do this shit!" She noticed the panic in his voice.
 

"Baby please come here! I don't want to hurt you anymore! I'll never hurt you!"
 

"You said this all times. I don't believe this lie! If I'd come to you you'd hurt me again and again! Go away! Go away from me!"
 

"No baby! Please come here to me! And then I will leave you but just come here to me!"
 

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"Hey Darling wake up!" He opened his eyes and looked into her beautiful face. She kissed him. "What a wonderful day!" He smiled. "Yes, but what will we do on this day?" She touched his skin and pressed her naked body on his body. "Why we don't stay here and ... we end what you have just began?"

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"I feel this pain. It should go away! Why do you do this to me? Why?"
 

"Baby please! All I ever want was you! I love you!"
 

"But I don't want you anymore! It hurts so much! Please go away!"
 

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"I love you." She wispered in his ear. But he doesn't answered. She looked at him. "Hey Darling what's the matter? I said I love you." "Yes, I know but please don't be sad I can't say this!" "Why not?" "I need time. Someday I could say this real."

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"Go away! I don't want you! I don't love you anymore!"
 

"But I love you baby!! So please don't jump!"
 

She shaked her head. The tears fall down at her face.
 

"You never loved me. That's a lie! I don't want to hear this!"
 

He cames close to her slowly.
 

"GO AWAY!!" she shouted again. "I'LL JUMP!!"
 

"Please baby don't do this to me!" On more step.
 

"I'll give you everthing what you want but please come here to me! Don't make this worse as it is!"
 

"Please leave me alone! I can't carry on my life! I don't love you anymore! Go away please!"
 

"That's not the truth! You love me. I know this! You will always love me! You can't live without me!"
 

"Maybe you're right." She said softly now and then she jumped.
 

"No!! No!! NOOOO!!!!" He ran to her tried to catch her but it was to late.



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Von: abgemeldet
2007-03-19T16:07:52+00:00 19.03.2007 17:07
ich kann mich nur anschließen, wirklich sehr schön
Von: abgemeldet
2006-10-19T19:29:40+00:00 19.10.2006 21:29
*vorbei klimper*
sehr schön geschrieben ^.^
Von: abgemeldet
2006-06-15T13:55:20+00:00 15.06.2006 15:55
OO *ganz geblättet ist*
Hätte nich gedacht dass au englische FF's so auf mich wirken können.. <.<
Echt super geschrieben, aber sie sit so traurig! ;_m
und das sie dann wirklich gesprungen ist.. *nicht gedacht hätte* -_-** So traurig.. *flenn*
Von: abgemeldet
2006-05-12T06:45:35+00:00 12.05.2006 08:45
O__O *starr*
sie ist... gesprungen????? waaaaaah!! *PanikZ*
oh man, das war mal echt traurig... und auch noch auf englisch, echt genial! puh.... *TaschentücherSuchZ*
Von: abgemeldet
2006-04-20T12:24:48+00:00 20.04.2006 14:24
das hast du sehr schön geschrieben! Die FF ist wirklcih traurig *schnief*
Sowas hätte ich nie auf englisch hinbekommen,.vermutlich nicht mal auf Deustch ^^''
Wirklich schön geschrieben,..auch ein toller schreibstil und mit Spannung drin =)
Von: abgemeldet
2006-04-09T20:11:13+00:00 09.04.2006 22:11
wow... die is echt gut... ich hätt sowas auf englisch nie hingekriegt! wirklich gut...
Von: abgemeldet
2006-03-21T20:19:46+00:00 21.03.2006 21:19
*gänsehaut*
toll geschriebn klaines (auch wenn dein englisch teilweise nich ganz risch is.. aber macht esht nix aus)
Von:  Pezi
2006-03-20T17:12:37+00:00 20.03.2006 18:12
Sehr Schön, und sehr traurig.
Von:  JoodyMoody
2006-03-19T14:27:24+00:00 19.03.2006 15:27
Ach ja ich kannte die FF ja schon aber sie ist immer noch so traurig *schniff*....


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