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Bitte keine Beleidigungen oder Flames! Falls Ihr Kritik habt, formuliert sie bitte konstruktiv.
Von:  Schnullerkai
2020-03-27T20:57:38+00:00 27.03.2020 21:57
Hello! Just stumbled upon this, and I'm thrilled. Love the drawing, the characters, the story. Your anatomy skill is stunning. I love how your characters are all just so... human. Complicated, but not in the idiotic "I won't talk to you only for the plot to have drama"-way you see so often in love stories.
It's a little annoying to read because of the size of the pages on computer screen. Kleinansicht is to small to read, Großansicht makes me scroll myself to death, especially when you put the support info on the page as well. Still worth it, though.
I already read in the comments you won't do a printed version. That's sad, but who am I to force you.
Might be me, but when I saw how old Paul and Wilmar are, I was surprised. Would have estimated both of them to be roughly ten years older. Especially Wilmar is really young for his position, I think. That said, I'm impressed by you being able to make your characters look like being in their 30s.

Looking forward to new pages, I really, really like this one. :)

English is not my mother tongue, but the comments indicated English is easier for you. Sorry for any mistakes.
Antwort von:  KabraKare
28.03.2020 21:51
Thank you for your comment! I'm sorry for the size of the pages. I make it according standards of the hosting Webtoons and then post it here with translation into German.