Demon Dinner
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War ne interessante story ! Und echt toll umgesetzt ,find ich .
An opportunity to write in English!!!
I think it was a really nice short-story, I like the way you created a new kind of thing, you couldn't see what was going to happen next. It's also a nice way to think about what happens after death, I especially liked the part with the symbiosis. That was really smart!
There might be some places where you could tweak the English a bit, but hey, who am I to say? ;)
I'm also a big fan of your manga "high angle", so it would make me happy if you kept it up so I would have something to admire!!! :D
I think it was a really nice short-story, I like the way you created a new kind of thing, you couldn't see what was going to happen next. It's also a nice way to think about what happens after death, I especially liked the part with the symbiosis. That was really smart!
There might be some places where you could tweak the English a bit, but hey, who am I to say? ;)
I'm also a big fan of your manga "high angle", so it would make me happy if you kept it up so I would have something to admire!!! :D
Ich hab das gerade alles mal gelesen und ich muss sagen, dass das voll awesome ist *____*
Das ist so gut & so professionell, & originell, es wirkt iwie voll wie ein echter shonen-manga :oo
Ich hab es voll genossen (der Humor!! :DD) & wow... ich bin jetzt ein noch größerer fan :DD
Das ist so gut & so professionell, & originell, es wirkt iwie voll wie ein echter shonen-manga :oo
Ich hab es voll genossen (der Humor!! :DD) & wow... ich bin jetzt ein noch größerer fan :DD
