This is the story of the Pryel family that are known to have disappeared 8 years ago after the attack of the rebellians. Lord and Lady Pryel have been murdered while Crystal Pryel has been taken by the rebellians and Miuna Pryel has managed to escape in the human world however she lost her memories. The Pryel family is an important Angel and Vampire family. Miuna is an Angel (like her mother) while Crystal a Vampire (like her father) Miuna has now after 8 years got an letter from the vampire palace....will her memories come back if she goes on this journey?
Starring in the first book:
Miuna Pryel
Gabriël Turner
Sophia Turner
Jake Turner
Angel Heavenly
Daniël Price
Adam Smiery
Xander Pryel
Safira Polidoro
Crystal Pryel
Lucinda Price
Alera Michingan
Airisa Sirene
Narian Grey
Christian Santieno
Aline Knight
Ivy Bominable
Mali Naiko
Jesse Abigon
Leah
Forgotten Past
Erstellt: 29.03.2016
Letzte Änderung: 08.04.2016
Letzte Änderung: 08.04.2016
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Englisch
4612 Wörter, 7 Kapitel
4612 Wörter, 7 Kapitel
Thema: Eigene Serie
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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| ~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 29.03.2016 U: 08.04.2016 |
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| Prolog Epilogue | E: 29.03.2016 U: 08.04.2016 |
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| Kapitel 1 Deja Vu | E: 29.03.2016 U: 08.04.2016 |
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| Kapitel 2 Ball NIght | E: 29.03.2016 U: 08.04.2016 |
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| Kapitel 3 Morning of Fate | E: 29.03.2016 U: 08.04.2016 |
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| Kapitel 4 Bloody Truth | E: 29.03.2016 U: 08.04.2016 |
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| Kapitel 5 The resque ((part 1)) | E: 29.03.2016 U: 08.04.2016 |
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| Kapitel 6 The resque ((part2)) | E: 29.03.2016 U: 08.04.2016 |
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Ah, the action is kicking in.
By the way, when Miu regains her memory, it's the perfect opportunity to introduce us to her background, as in explaining who she is, who her friends were and what relation she had to the others, especially Gabriel.
Hope there will be a bit more lovey-dovey and drama. Keep it up.
By the way, when Miu regains her memory, it's the perfect opportunity to introduce us to her background, as in explaining who she is, who her friends were and what relation she had to the others, especially Gabriel.
Hope there will be a bit more lovey-dovey and drama. Keep it up.
This sentence confused me: "Let me present myself to those that don't know me I am Angel Heavenly goddes of light,love and life. And also an Angel.". Is she called "Angel" ? If yes, you should change the formulation into something like: "I am called Angel. As the name implies, i also am one.". or something like that.
I'm really in awe to know, what species the other people around Miu are. I hope they ain't only angels though. Also, why is there a rebellion? Do i sense yet another plot twist coming up? It's getting exciting.
I'm really in awe to know, what species the other people around Miu are. I hope they ain't only angels though. Also, why is there a rebellion? Do i sense yet another plot twist coming up? It's getting exciting.
Dayum, what a plot twist. Btw, you have some typos in the texts.
Does she have a name? The invitation would normally show, i guess that's a good spot for you to introduce her name. I also wonder how her magic works.
'Sup,
check your punctuation, i'm missing some commas in here. Also, i like the idea of her being unable to go back to the vampire realm (since she said she'd be stuck in the human world) but i guess she can. I love this fantasy stuff, so i hope it turns out well. I'll look forward to the next chapters.
check your punctuation, i'm missing some commas in here. Also, i like the idea of her being unable to go back to the vampire realm (since she said she'd be stuck in the human world) but i guess she can. I love this fantasy stuff, so i hope it turns out well. I'll look forward to the next chapters.
