Threads of Fate

Ok, I'll try to do this in English as well :)
First of all, I don't know Naruto but I'm always glad when I read a fanfiction that I can understand without having a lot of background knowledge. It is a bit more difficult in chapter 2, but I guess it's impossible to write this story for complete beginners without destroying it.
I really like the way you show the feelings and thoughts of all characters, which gives you more information and makes the situation even weirder as the parents seem to be real. Your style of writing underlines the storyline well, as you use many adjectives and adverbs and change the style for every person in a suitable way.
There are some smaller mistakes, but I could still understand everything.