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Angel's Tear


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127187 Wörter, 27 Kapitel
I started writing this fanfic ages ago, and this is the final draft. The idea behind it was basically that I noticed some similarities to Star Wars, so I started to wonder what would happen if Lloyd was to have a twin sister. The story is mostly centered around her, and an old prophecy that promises salvation.
I stuck to the story as seen in the game for most parts, but used the manga and OVA for inspiration as well. And of course the characters I invented change the story...

Note: all the pictures I used are from the internet, I do not own them.

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~komplette Fanfic~ V: 09.06.2011
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Prolog The Prophecy E: 09.06.2011
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Kapitel 1 The unknown Sister E: 10.06.2011
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Kapitel 2 Lost in Despair E: 10.06.2011
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Kapitel 3 Knowledge is Power E: 10.06.2011
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Kapitel 4 A Declaration of War and other Plans E: 11.06.2011
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Kapitel 5 The Oracle E: 12.06.2011
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Kapitel 6 Forcystus' Judgement E: 12.06.2011
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Kapitel 7 Wanted E: 17.06.2011
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Kapitel 8 The Assassin E: 17.06.2011
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Kapitel 9 An Encounter E: 17.06.2011
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Kapitel 10 The Truth about Exspheres E: 17.06.2011
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Kapitel 11 Sheena's Gift E: 17.06.2011
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Kapitel 12 The Tower of the Dead E: 18.06.2011
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Kapitel 13 Strange new World E: 18.06.2011
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Kapitel 14 Presea's Secret E: 19.06.2011
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Kapitel 15 The Siege of Heimdall E: 21.06.2011
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Kapitel 16 Pacts and mana-links E: 22.06.2011
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Kapitel 17 The Mana Canon E: 23.06.2011
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Kapitel 18 Odyssey E: 28.06.2011
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Kapitel 19 Welgaia, the lifeless City E: 29.06.2011
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Kapitel 20 Matters that should remain secret E: 30.06.2011
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Kapitel 21 Tower of Betrayal E: 03.07.2011
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Kapitel 22 Martel's final Request E: 04.07.2011
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Kapitel 23 Family E: 05.07.2011
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Kapitel 24 Derris-Kharlan E: 06.07.2011
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Kapitel 25 Death and Rebirth E: 07.07.2011
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Epilog Hope E: 08.07.2011
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  • Stelmaria Rosemary Aurion

    Age: first appearance: 8, last appearance: 2010
    Race: half-elf/angel
    Weapon: dual swords, magic
    Hair: white-blonde
    Eyes: ice-blue
    Wings: feathery, white
    Relatives: Parents: Kratos & Rosemary (deceased), Siblings: Alice & Lloyd

    Once a cheerful young girl, Stelmaria becomes an embittered and cold woman who hates humans - including her own father. She refuses to see that by keeping secrets from her he was trying to protect her, or that he was too ashamed to talk about his past...

    [chara is based on a very vague idea my brother had]
  • Alice Luna Aurion

    Age: first appearance: 3, last appearance: 20
    Race: human
    Eyes: dark blue
    Hair: reddish-brown
    Weapon: two-hand sword, magic
    Relatives: Parents: Kratos & Anna, Siblings: Stelmaria, Lloyd

    Alice never had a home, all she knew was how to run away. Her personality is very contradictory: on the one hand, she loves to help people and wishes for understanding between the races, on the other hand, she is a warrior who shows her enemy no mercy. Her life is more or less centered around her thirst for revenge and her concern for her family...

    [chara is my own creation]
  • Charakter
    Kratos Aurion

    Age: first appearance: 2026, last appearance 4028
    Race: human/angel
    Eyes: brown
    Weapon: longsword, magic
    Hair: reddish-brown
    Relatives: Wives: Rosemary (deceased), Anna; Children: Stelmaria, Alice & Lloyd

    A silent and secretive man, Kratos dislikes showing any emotions. Very long ago, he gave up on correcting his mistakes, he has lost all hope.

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Yuan Ka-Fai

    Age: first appearance: 4008, last appearance: 4023
    Race: half-elf/angel
    Eyes: green
    Hair: turquoise-blue
    Weapon: I have no idea what this is called, but it's awesome. And he's got magic.
    Relatives: unknown, Fiancée: Martel Yggdrasill (deceased)

    Yuan is a bloody opportunist who would do anything to reach his goal, no matter how dirty. He doesn't really care about his friendship with Kratos and Mithos, either. Would like to have the cooperation of Alice and Stelmaria.

    [original character]
  • Botta

    Age: unknown
    Race: half-elf
    Hair: brown
    Eyes: blue
    Weapon: a strange thing just like Yuan, magic
    Relatives: unknown

    Botta is Yuan's right-hand man and always carries his orders out precisely. Even though he appears older than Yuan and Stelmaria, he is actually much younger, given the fact that he is not an angel. Botta is more compassionate than Yuan, he actually cares for others. Shares a bond of friendship with Alice - despite her being human.

    [original character]
  • Ríen

    Age: first appearance: 6, last appearance: 23
    Race: elf
    Weapon: bow, magic
    Hair: green
    Eyes: green
    Relatives: Mother: Ayleen, Father: a hunter, name unknown, several younger siblings

    The first elf to befriend Alice, he quickly becomes her personal pillar of strength. Would do anything to help her.

    [chara is my creation]
  • Charakter
    Lloyd Irving

    Age: first appearance: 3, last appearance: 20
    Race: human
    Eyes: brown
    Hair: brown
    Weapon: dual swords
    Relatives: unknown, Foster father: Dirk

    Lloyd has no memories of his mother's death and doesn't know anything about his father. He considers his foster-father Dirk his family. He is a rather lazy person who dislikes studying a lot, the only things he is interested in are swordfighting and his father's craftsmanship.

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Colette Brunel

    Age: 16
    Race: human
    Eyes: blue
    Hair: gold-blonde
    Weapon: Chakrams
    Relatives: Father: Frank, Mother: deceased, Grandmother: Phaidra

    The Chosen of Sylvarant, she is destined to save the world. Colette is very trusting and forgiving. She is extremely clumsy and falls down and apologises a lot.

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Genis Sage

    Age: 12
    Race: elf
    Eyes: blue
    Weapon: Kendama, magic
    Hair: white
    Relatives: Sister: Raine, Parents: Virginia & Kloitz (deceased)

    Lloyd's best friend, a genius who is an excellent student.

    [orignial character]
  • Charakter
    Raine Sage

    Age: 22
    Race: elf
    Eyes: blue
    Hair: white
    Weapon: staff, magic
    Relatives: Brother: Genis, Parents: Virginia & Kloitz (deceased)

    The teacher of the village of Iselia, and Genis' older sister. She is obsessed with ruins - Lloyd calls that her "ruin mode" since she seems like a completely different person.

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Sheena Fujibayashi

    Age: 19
    Race: human
    Eyes: brown
    Hair: black
    Weapon: Spellcards
    Relatives: unknown, Adoptive grandfather: Chief Igaguri

    A mysterious girl who tries to kill Colette. Her own tragic past is linked to Volt whom she greatly fears... She formed a pact with the artificial Summon Spirit Corinne.

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Presea Combatir

    Age: 12?
    Race: human
    Eyes: blue
    Hair: pink
    Weapon: Axe
    Relatives: Father: Sieg, Sister: Alicia, Mother: unknown

    A small girl working as a lumberjack. Incredibly strong. Barely talks, shows no emotions. A true mystery.

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Zelos Wilder

    Age: 23
    Race: human
    Eyes: blue
    Hair: red
    Weapon: short sword, magic
    Relatives: Parents: the previous Chosen (name unknown) & Mylene, Sister: Seles

    The chosen of Tethe'alla, Zelos is a carefree young man who loves women and parties. His easygoing manner enrages Lloyd quite often. However, Zelos has his own problems to deal with...

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Regal

    Age: 33
    Race: human
    Eyes: blue
    Hair: blue
    Weapon: his legs
    Relatives: unknown

    A convict released to capture Colette. Seems to have a connection to Presea. Admits to being a murderer, but refuses to reveal anything more about his past...

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Mithos Yggdrassil

    Age: first appearance: 3397, last appearance: 4012
    Race: half-elf/angel
    Eyes: green
    Hair: blonde
    Weapon: magic
    Relatives: Sister: Martel (deceased)

    The leader of Cruxis and ruler of the world, he is the most powerful man in the world. Not someone you'd like to cross. Used to be Kratos' apprentice.

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Forcystus

    Age: unknown
    Race: half-elf
    Weapon: a magitech-cannon, magic
    Hair: turquoise
    Eyes: red, eye-patch
    Relatives: unknown

    One of the Desian Grand Cardinals, he is the ruler of the Iselia Ranch. He is a Desian hero who killed some humans who massacred half-elves.

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Magnius

    Age: unknown
    Race: half-elf
    Weapon: Axe, magic
    Hair: red
    Eyes: blue
    Relatives: unknown

    Leader of the Palmacosta Ranch

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Kvar

    Age: unknown
    Race: half-elf
    Weapon: staff, magic
    Hair: blonde
    Eyes: red
    Relatives: unknown

    Called the most cruel of the Grand Cardinals for a reason. He managed to earn himself the hatred of both Alice and Kratos; he wants Lloyd's Exsphere for himself. Leader of the Asgard Ranch.

    [original character]
  • Rodyle

    Age: unknown
    Race: half-elf
    Weapon: magic
    Hair: green
    Relatives: unknown
    Relatives: unknown

    Secretly rebuilds the Mana Canon. His ranch lies under the sea between Izoold and Palmacosta.

    [original character]
  • Pronyma

    Age: unknown
    Race: half-elf
    Weapon: a cane, magic
    Hair: turquoise-green
    Eyes: red
    Relatives: unknown

    Leader of the Five Desian Grand Cardinals, she isn't really liked by the others. Personally, I believe she has a crush on Yggdrassil.

    [original character]
  • Charakter
    Origin

    Position: King of Summon Spirits

    Bound to and sealed by Kratos. His seal lies in the holy Torent Forest that is part of the elves' territory. Created the Eternal Sword.
  • Charakter
    Aska

    Position: Summon Spirit of Daylight

    Aska shares a bond with Lloyd; he is bound by Mithos. The Seal of Light can be found at the Tower of Mana.
  • Charakter
    Luna

    Position: Sumon Spirit of Moonlight

    Luna shares a bond with Alice, she is bound by Mithos. The Seal of Light can be found at the Tower of Mana.
  • Charakter
    Shadow

    Position: Summon Spirit of Darkness

    Opposite to Luna and Aska. Doesn't waste any words. Bound to Mithos.
  • Charakter
    Celsius

    Position: Summon Spirit of Ice

    Efreet's opposite. Really dislikes him. Bound to Mithos.
  • Charakter
    Efreet

    Position: Summon Spirit of Fire

    Bound to Mithos, his seal lies deep within the Triet Ruins
  • Charakter
    Gnome

    Position: Summon Spirit of Earth

    Sylph's opposite. Has a funny way of talking. Bound to Mithos.
  • Charakter
    Sylph

    Position: Summon Spirit of Wind

    Together, Sephie (sword), Yutis (bow) and Fairess (shield) form the Sylph. Bound to Mithos, their seal lies in the Balacruf Mausoleum.
  • Charakter
    Undine

    Position: Summon Spirit of Water

    Bound to Mithos, her seal lies within the Thoda Geyser.
  • Charakter
    Volt

    Position: Summon Spirit of Lightning

    Undine's opposite, bound to Mithos, hates people.
  • Charakter
    Maxwell

    Position: Ruler of Matter

    Cut the town of Exire loose from the surface and made it float in the sky, as a sanctuary for half-elves.
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