I started writing this fanfic ages ago, and this is the final draft. The idea behind it was basically that I noticed some similarities to Star Wars, so I started to wonder what would happen if Lloyd was to have a twin sister. The story is mostly centered around her, and an old prophecy that promises salvation.
I stuck to the story as seen in the game for most parts, but used the manga and OVA for inspiration as well. And of course the characters I invented change the story...
Note: all the pictures I used are from the internet, I do not own them.
Angel's Tear
Erstellt: 09.06.2011
Letzte Änderung: 08.07.2011
Letzte Änderung: 08.07.2011
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Englisch
127187 Wörter, 27 Kapitel
127187 Wörter, 27 Kapitel
Hauptcharaktere: Kratos Aurion, Lloyd Irving, Yuan Ka-Fai, Martel Yggdrasil, Zelos Wilder, Colette Brunel, Mithos Yggdrasil, Tabatha, Sheena Fujibayashi, Presea Combatir, Raine Sage, Anna Irving, Botta, Genis Sage
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Prolog The Prophecy | E: 09.06.2011 U: 09.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 1 The unknown Sister | E: 10.06.2011 U: 10.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 2 Lost in Despair | E: 10.06.2011 U: 10.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 3 Knowledge is Power | E: 10.06.2011 U: 10.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 4 A Declaration of War and other Plans | E: 11.06.2011 U: 10.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 5 The Oracle | E: 12.06.2011 U: 11.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 6 Forcystus' Judgement | E: 12.06.2011 U: 12.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 7 Wanted | E: 17.06.2011 U: 12.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 8 The Assassin | E: 17.06.2011 U: 17.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 9 An Encounter | E: 17.06.2011 U: 17.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 10 The Truth about Exspheres | E: 17.06.2011 U: 17.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 11 Sheena's Gift | E: 17.06.2011 U: 17.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 12 The Tower of the Dead | E: 18.06.2011 U: 18.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 13 Strange new World | E: 18.06.2011 U: 18.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 14 Presea's Secret | E: 19.06.2011 U: 19.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 15 The Siege of Heimdall | E: 21.06.2011 U: 21.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 16 Pacts and mana-links | E: 22.06.2011 U: 22.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 17 The Mana Canon | E: 23.06.2011 U: 23.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 18 Odyssey | E: 28.06.2011 U: 28.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 19 Welgaia, the lifeless City | E: 29.06.2011 U: 29.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 20 Matters that should remain secret | E: 30.06.2011 U: 30.06.2011 |
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Kapitel 21 Tower of Betrayal | E: 03.07.2011 U: 03.07.2011 |
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Kapitel 22 Martel's final Request | E: 04.07.2011 U: 04.07.2011 |
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Kapitel 23 Family | E: 05.07.2011 U: 05.07.2011 |
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Kapitel 24 Derris-Kharlan | E: 06.07.2011 U: 06.07.2011 |
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Kapitel 25 Death and Rebirth | E: 07.07.2011 U: 07.07.2011 |
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Epilog Hope | E: 08.07.2011 U: 08.07.2011 |
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Stelmaria Rosemary Aurion
Age: first appearance: 8, last appearance: 2010
Race: half-elf/angel
Weapon: dual swords, magic
Hair: white-blonde
Eyes: ice-blue
Wings: feathery, white
Relatives: Parents: Kratos & Rosemary (deceased), Siblings: Alice & Lloyd
Once a cheerful young girl, Stelmaria becomes an embittered and cold woman who hates humans - including her own father. She refuses to see that by keeping secrets from her he was trying to protect her, or that he was too ashamed to talk about his past...
[chara is based on a very vague idea my brother had] -
Alice Luna Aurion
Age: first appearance: 3, last appearance: 20
Race: human
Eyes: dark blue
Hair: reddish-brown
Weapon: two-hand sword, magic
Relatives: Parents: Kratos & Anna, Siblings: Stelmaria, Lloyd
Alice never had a home, all she knew was how to run away. Her personality is very contradictory: on the one hand, she loves to help people and wishes for understanding between the races, on the other hand, she is a warrior who shows her enemy no mercy. Her life is more or less centered around her thirst for revenge and her concern for her family...
[chara is my own creation] -
Kratos Aurion
Age: first appearance: 2026, last appearance 4028
Race: human/angel
Eyes: brown
Weapon: longsword, magic
Hair: reddish-brown
Relatives: Wives: Rosemary (deceased), Anna; Children: Stelmaria, Alice & Lloyd
A silent and secretive man, Kratos dislikes showing any emotions. Very long ago, he gave up on correcting his mistakes, he has lost all hope.
[original character] -
Yuan Ka-Fai
Age: first appearance: 4008, last appearance: 4023
Race: half-elf/angel
Eyes: green
Hair: turquoise-blue
Weapon: I have no idea what this is called, but it's awesome. And he's got magic.
Relatives: unknown, Fiancée: Martel Yggdrasill (deceased)
Yuan is a bloody opportunist who would do anything to reach his goal, no matter how dirty. He doesn't really care about his friendship with Kratos and Mithos, either. Would like to have the cooperation of Alice and Stelmaria.
[original character] -
Botta
Age: unknown
Race: half-elf
Hair: brown
Eyes: blue
Weapon: a strange thing just like Yuan, magic
Relatives: unknown
Botta is Yuan's right-hand man and always carries his orders out precisely. Even though he appears older than Yuan and Stelmaria, he is actually much younger, given the fact that he is not an angel. Botta is more compassionate than Yuan, he actually cares for others. Shares a bond of friendship with Alice - despite her being human.
[original character] -
Ríen
Age: first appearance: 6, last appearance: 23
Race: elf
Weapon: bow, magic
Hair: green
Eyes: green
Relatives: Mother: Ayleen, Father: a hunter, name unknown, several younger siblings
The first elf to befriend Alice, he quickly becomes her personal pillar of strength. Would do anything to help her.
[chara is my creation] -
Lloyd Irving
Age: first appearance: 3, last appearance: 20
Race: human
Eyes: brown
Hair: brown
Weapon: dual swords
Relatives: unknown, Foster father: Dirk
Lloyd has no memories of his mother's death and doesn't know anything about his father. He considers his foster-father Dirk his family. He is a rather lazy person who dislikes studying a lot, the only things he is interested in are swordfighting and his father's craftsmanship.
[original character] -
Colette Brunel
Age: 16
Race: human
Eyes: blue
Hair: gold-blonde
Weapon: Chakrams
Relatives: Father: Frank, Mother: deceased, Grandmother: Phaidra
The Chosen of Sylvarant, she is destined to save the world. Colette is very trusting and forgiving. She is extremely clumsy and falls down and apologises a lot.
[original character] -
Genis Sage
Age: 12
Race: elf
Eyes: blue
Weapon: Kendama, magic
Hair: white
Relatives: Sister: Raine, Parents: Virginia & Kloitz (deceased)
Lloyd's best friend, a genius who is an excellent student.
[orignial character] -
Raine Sage
Age: 22
Race: elf
Eyes: blue
Hair: white
Weapon: staff, magic
Relatives: Brother: Genis, Parents: Virginia & Kloitz (deceased)
The teacher of the village of Iselia, and Genis' older sister. She is obsessed with ruins - Lloyd calls that her "ruin mode" since she seems like a completely different person.
[original character] -
Sheena Fujibayashi
Age: 19
Race: human
Eyes: brown
Hair: black
Weapon: Spellcards
Relatives: unknown, Adoptive grandfather: Chief Igaguri
A mysterious girl who tries to kill Colette. Her own tragic past is linked to Volt whom she greatly fears... She formed a pact with the artificial Summon Spirit Corinne.
[original character] -
Presea Combatir
Age: 12?
Race: human
Eyes: blue
Hair: pink
Weapon: Axe
Relatives: Father: Sieg, Sister: Alicia, Mother: unknown
A small girl working as a lumberjack. Incredibly strong. Barely talks, shows no emotions. A true mystery.
[original character] -
Zelos Wilder
Age: 23
Race: human
Eyes: blue
Hair: red
Weapon: short sword, magic
Relatives: Parents: the previous Chosen (name unknown) & Mylene, Sister: Seles
The chosen of Tethe'alla, Zelos is a carefree young man who loves women and parties. His easygoing manner enrages Lloyd quite often. However, Zelos has his own problems to deal with...
[original character] -
Regal
Age: 33
Race: human
Eyes: blue
Hair: blue
Weapon: his legs
Relatives: unknown
A convict released to capture Colette. Seems to have a connection to Presea. Admits to being a murderer, but refuses to reveal anything more about his past...
[original character] -
Mithos Yggdrassil
Age: first appearance: 3397, last appearance: 4012
Race: half-elf/angel
Eyes: green
Hair: blonde
Weapon: magic
Relatives: Sister: Martel (deceased)
The leader of Cruxis and ruler of the world, he is the most powerful man in the world. Not someone you'd like to cross. Used to be Kratos' apprentice.
[original character] -
Forcystus
Age: unknown
Race: half-elf
Weapon: a magitech-cannon, magic
Hair: turquoise
Eyes: red, eye-patch
Relatives: unknown
One of the Desian Grand Cardinals, he is the ruler of the Iselia Ranch. He is a Desian hero who killed some humans who massacred half-elves.
[original character] -
Magnius
Age: unknown
Race: half-elf
Weapon: Axe, magic
Hair: red
Eyes: blue
Relatives: unknown
Leader of the Palmacosta Ranch
[original character] -
Kvar
Age: unknown
Race: half-elf
Weapon: staff, magic
Hair: blonde
Eyes: red
Relatives: unknown
Called the most cruel of the Grand Cardinals for a reason. He managed to earn himself the hatred of both Alice and Kratos; he wants Lloyd's Exsphere for himself. Leader of the Asgard Ranch.
[original character] -
Rodyle
Age: unknown
Race: half-elf
Weapon: magic
Hair: green
Relatives: unknown
Relatives: unknown
Secretly rebuilds the Mana Canon. His ranch lies under the sea between Izoold and Palmacosta.
[original character] -
Pronyma
Age: unknown
Race: half-elf
Weapon: a cane, magic
Hair: turquoise-green
Eyes: red
Relatives: unknown
Leader of the Five Desian Grand Cardinals, she isn't really liked by the others. Personally, I believe she has a crush on Yggdrassil.
[original character] -
Origin
Position: King of Summon Spirits
Bound to and sealed by Kratos. His seal lies in the holy Torent Forest that is part of the elves' territory. Created the Eternal Sword. -
Aska
Position: Summon Spirit of Daylight
Aska shares a bond with Lloyd; he is bound by Mithos. The Seal of Light can be found at the Tower of Mana. -
Luna
Position: Sumon Spirit of Moonlight
Luna shares a bond with Alice, she is bound by Mithos. The Seal of Light can be found at the Tower of Mana. -
Shadow
Position: Summon Spirit of Darkness
Opposite to Luna and Aska. Doesn't waste any words. Bound to Mithos. -
Celsius
Position: Summon Spirit of Ice
Efreet's opposite. Really dislikes him. Bound to Mithos. -
Efreet
Position: Summon Spirit of Fire
Bound to Mithos, his seal lies deep within the Triet Ruins -
Gnome
Position: Summon Spirit of Earth
Sylph's opposite. Has a funny way of talking. Bound to Mithos. -
Sylph
Position: Summon Spirit of Wind
Together, Sephie (sword), Yutis (bow) and Fairess (shield) form the Sylph. Bound to Mithos, their seal lies in the Balacruf Mausoleum. -
Undine
Position: Summon Spirit of Water
Bound to Mithos, her seal lies within the Thoda Geyser. -
Volt
Position: Summon Spirit of Lightning
Undine's opposite, bound to Mithos, hates people. -
Maxwell
Position: Ruler of Matter
Cut the town of Exire loose from the surface and made it float in the sky, as a sanctuary for half-elves.
- Fanfic allgemein -
Prolog: The ProphecyEpilog: HopeKapitel 1: The unknown SisterKapitel 2: Lost in DespairKapitel 3: Knowledge is PowerKapitel 4: A Declaration of War and other PlansKapitel 5: The OracleKapitel 6: Forcystus' JudgementKapitel 7: WantedKapitel 8: The AssassinKapitel 9: An EncounterKapitel 10: The Truth about ExspheresKapitel 11: Sheena's GiftKapitel 12: The Tower of the DeadKapitel 13: Strange new WorldKapitel 14: Presea's SecretKapitel 15: The Siege of HeimdallKapitel 16: Pacts and mana-linksKapitel 17: The Mana CanonKapitel 18: OdysseyKapitel 19: Welgaia, the lifeless CityKapitel 20: Matters that should remain secretKapitel 21: Tower of BetrayalKapitel 22: Martel's final RequestKapitel 23: FamilyKapitel 24: Derris-KharlanKapitel 25: Death and Rebirth
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