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Reality bites


Letzte Änderung: 26.04.2012
737 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Genre: Mystery

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Bitte keine Beleidigungen oder Flames! Falls Ihr Kritik habt, formuliert sie bitte konstruktiv.
Von:  Zimtphilosophie
2012-04-27T09:02:45+00:00 27.04.2012 11:02
Great finally someone who writes in english just like me.
I somehow get the feeling your not much of a Ran advocate. But Shiho really got the message across.
Moreover you greatly convey Shiho's commitment for Shinichi. Intensely sentimental & profound.
One question remains: When you wrote Chris, did you mean Vermouth, or did I misinterpreted something? Ah, and it shoudld be Jodie & Yūsaku not Jody & Yousako!
I would take mischievous pleasure, if I would come upon a comment on your part.
Constructive criticism dearly wished-for.
Keep up your good work!

Yours sincerely,