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Ashalle   [Zeichner-Galerie] Upload: 08.05.2020 13:31
text by: Fenharel <3 It is a bit smutty, nothing explicit, but still...smut :'D

The air in Emprise was cold and let his breath come out in puffy clouds. There was nothing in front of them except ice and snow. If it hadn't been for the red Templars and the red lyrium shards it would have been almost peaceful.
Solas gazed over the frozen lake beneath them, having strolled a bit farther away from their camp. He had enjoyed the peace and silence of his solitude, the cold not bothering him at all thanks to the spell he had cast on his body in order to keep himself warm.
His gaze shifted to the wolves in the distance, hunting their prey and running in freedom. The elven mage found himself envying them for a moment, longing to join them in their hunt and running over the powdery snow, free and without spending a thought on what was to come in the future.
He had been so engrossed in his thoughts that he hadn't noticed the footsteps approaching him, until it was too late. Something cold and wet had hit the back of his head. „Got you.“ a female Voice chirped behind him, and he did not need to turn around in order to know exactly who the person was, that had thrown a snowball after him.
„It seems so.“ he had answered, his posture calm and composed before he turned around, looking into the face of Ashalle, who had a bright smile on her face and a mischievous glint in her deep blue Eyes. He couldn't help the tugging of his lips that morphed into a smile, like they always did, when he saw her smile. It hadn't always been that way, he just found enjoying those bright smiles and that glint in her eyes recently.
His Feet shifted slightly, as he scooped up snow as well, threw it after her. However, she had been able to dodge, gave him the expression she could muster up, before she hit him once more with a hand full of snow. This time in his face, before she outright laughed about his openly startled expression. „You know, that this is calling for a revenge?“ the elven Mage asked with one of his teasing smiles. „I do know. But you would need to catch me first.“ she had exclaimed, before she sprinted trough the Snow, running with a melodic laugh, feet moving so fast that they barely touched the snow and for a moment he found himself just watching her run, remembering her first walk through the snow, staggering behind him, trying walk in his footsteps, so she could walk through the high piled up powder.
But Solas had been on her trail before he had even realized that he had moved at all. His feet moved in a just as fast pace over the powdered snow as he hunted her trough the narrow stone passages. Her squeals and pants echoing along the iced over walls of the old tunnels, that had laid mostly hidden beneath the snow now. A wild look shone in his eyes, making them almost glint in the darkness, a wicked grin on his face, while he ran after her in freedom, enjoying the wind that was rushing past him.
She managed to trick him a few times, pausing in her running before she dashed into another direction, laughing with glee while she was being hunted by him. Hunted by the wolf that he was deep within, and that showed now. Oh if only she knew who he was, knew that there was no way that she could run from him. The dreadwolf always caught his prey after all, if he had caught its scent, and he had gotten hers long ago.
He played with her, let her run, let her dodge, but with a last leap he caught her body in his arms, pulled her down with him, causing them to roll in the deep, cold snow.
„Got you.“ he murmured against her ear, warm lips pressed against it feeling it twitch delightfully under the hot breath that grazed it. A little whimper escaped her Lips, almost inaudible, when he pressed her into the snow, his Body pressed close against her heated form.
Wild locks laid splayed all over the white snow, the copper red a stark contrast to the whiteness, while she was pressed down into the cold and wet powder. His head bent down, lips grazed the neck that was exposed to him in that position as she laid beneath him and again he felt like a predator, that had just caught his prey, playing with it, before he devoured it.
He sucked on the soft skin on her Neck, growling against the warm skin, gently grazing the scar that had been caused by a collar on the back of her neck, marking the scarred skin in his own unique way that made her moan beneath him.
His Body moved against hers as he pressed her down in such a promising way while he whispered ancient elvhen innuendos in her ear, knowing that this would undo her even more, even if she couldn't understand him. And it did, he could feel her shiver beneath him, head stretched, exposing her neck even more in the submissive way she used when she wanted to tease him, to do more than this, moaning loudly as his Lips had moved to her ear, tongue flicking over the Curve teasing the soft skin, before he bit into the tip.
„Solas...“ a breathed whimper, a pleading voice, she moved her Body against his, face twisted in arousal. With a deep chuckle that escaped his throat he moved on, to suck at the tip of her ear, let his tongue glide over it, his movements promising even more pleasure, knowing that this drove her mad with want and undid her in any way possible.
But as soon as it had begun, so soon it ended, when he withdrew from her, leaving her a panting mess laying on wet snow, molten in their heat, while he brushed the white powder off his coat. „We should be going back don't you think? The others must be waiting and I don't want to keep their precious Inquisitor occupied for too long.“ he stated with a smug smile on his Lips, knowing exactly what he had done to her and feeling no remorse about it.
„I will get revenge for that.“ she promised him, made him chuckle once more, as he helped her up into a standing position on her shaky legs. He leaned in once more, a last brushing of his warm lips against her now heated up ear. „I will grant you that. If you are able to catch me the next time.“ he whispered against it, a sweet promise for another hunt.
Themen:
Elfen und Feen, Dragon Age

Stile:
Computer koloriert

Charaktere:
Solas, Inquisitor, Elfe, Elf

Unterthemen:
Elfen, Dragon Age Inquisition (Videospiel)

Beschwerde
Dieses Bild nimmt an 1 Wettbewerb teil.


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Von:  Owl_of_the_Arcane
2020-05-08T13:03:20+00:00 08.05.2020 15:03
Nice colouring with soft transitions between light and shade. The feathery collars are well accentuated by highlights. Ashalle's hair is done well, showing single strands thanks to subtle shading and nuances in colour. Though the part where Solas is leaning on Ashalle's head her hair looks a bit too compressed. With Solas himself the bones of his head are drawn a bit too sharply I think. Especially his cheek bone and part of his jaw bone below his ear.
Their hands though a drawn near perfection and really drool worthy. A nice picture to support the short story implemented.
Antwort von:  Ashalle
08.05.2020 15:24
Ohh, thank you so much for your kind words and the critique! *___* I tried to fix the jaw bone multiple times :'D I know it's still to sharp D':
But this was my very first painting, so as soon as I am more familiar and practiced with it, I'll definitely take your words into account and try to paint over it again! <3
Antwort von:  Owl_of_the_Arcane
08.05.2020 17:27
Your welcome (^^). I guess you intended to make the jaw bone distinguish itself as a particular feature of Solas unique facial features. Since you are not using noticeable outlines to describe his face, using shades of colour itself comes natural, to give away the intended shape. My suggestion would be to either use a thinner line of colour, similar how you worked on his ear, or try to use a lighter shade of colour, though with the shadowed patch behind the jaw bone , that in itself could allready be enough. As for Solas' cheek bone I am unsure how to approach that. Its a particular place I find myself struggeling with often enough myself with the chracters I draw (^^"). Its allways a losing battle, as I opt to forego it completly, barely adding any depth and unique characteristics to the faces. Though my style tends to lean more to the anime/manga range than to a more realistic approach you are taking, which I truely admire. Keep up the good work and I am sure with due practice, results will show (^^).