Regulus Arcturus Black was fifteen, when he started to see him in another light.
James Fleamont Potter was seventeen, when Lily Evans wasn't his only interest anymore.
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{I don't know where I will be going with the story and if it will even come to more than a few short chapters. But I thought I give it a try.}
Triggerwarnings appear later in the fanfic.
I'll be good
Erstellt: 24.10.2020
Letzte Änderung: 21.03.2021
Letzte Änderung: 21.03.2021
nicht abgeschlossen (5%)
Englisch
11091 Wörter, 15 Kapitel
11091 Wörter, 15 Kapitel
Thema: Harry Potter
Hauptcharaktere: Sirius Black / Tatze, Regulus Arcturus Black, Remus Lupin / Moony, James Potter / Krone
Unterthemen: Herumtreiber-Ära
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| ~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 24.10.2020 U: 21.03.2021 |
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| Kapitel 1 Part One | E: 24.10.2020 U: 25.10.2020 |
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| Kapitel 2 Part Two | E: 27.10.2020 U: 02.11.2020 |
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| Kapitel 3 Part Three | E: 15.01.2021 U: 16.01.2021 |
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| Kapitel 4 Part Four | E: 26.01.2021 U: 26.01.2021 |
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| Kapitel 5 Part Five | E: 27.01.2021 U: 28.01.2021 |
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| Kapitel 6 Part Six | E: 28.01.2021 U: 01.02.2021 |
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Hi again!
Oh, it smells like anger! That was an interesting chapter and I asked myself what a kind of relationship Monny and Sirius have. Only friendship? I'm not sure, but I think, that we will see.
Whatever, most important is the construction of your story. We see only little moments, so we get to know the characters step by step. That's pretty nice.
There are so many long storys, it's a good variety. It's ok, they don't need to be longer. :)
Love greetings
Traumfänger
Oh, it smells like anger! That was an interesting chapter and I asked myself what a kind of relationship Monny and Sirius have. Only friendship? I'm not sure, but I think, that we will see.
Whatever, most important is the construction of your story. We see only little moments, so we get to know the characters step by step. That's pretty nice.
There are so many long storys, it's a good variety. It's ok, they don't need to be longer. :)
Love greetings
Traumfänger
I think the relationship between Pads and Moony will be self explanatory soon, haha :D
Thank you ♥
Thank you ♥
If I read the rest of your story, I will find the explanatory. ;) I read the next chapter long bevor, iso I have to read ist again. It was so lovely and so sad at the same time! T.T
Hi,
I need more time for this chapter, because I translate every word I didn't know. Thanks God for Google! XD
Now I have two new favourite words: smirk and smugly! Thanks for that!
It was a nice part, that you let James compare Reg with a cat. That is a very sweet idea. ♡
The Development of the way you tell the story is really interesting. Now you used dialogues but stayed by your writing style:no description! It's dark and there are stairs. Not more! That's really cool!
Oh, my day was pretty nice! Thanks!
Love greetings
Traumfänger
I need more time for this chapter, because I translate every word I didn't know. Thanks God for Google! XD
Now I have two new favourite words: smirk and smugly! Thanks for that!
It was a nice part, that you let James compare Reg with a cat. That is a very sweet idea. ♡
The Development of the way you tell the story is really interesting. Now you used dialogues but stayed by your writing style:no description! It's dark and there are stairs. Not more! That's really cool!
Oh, my day was pretty nice! Thanks!
Love greetings
Traumfänger
Hi,
and that was the next chapter. I thought, that you write only the beginning easy and with less sentences. It is really interesting to think about a story only written in this kind of telling.
Now, we can see the story out of James perspective. It is really, really short, but there is nothing I miss. You are an interesting and perfect author!
Love greetings
Traumfänger
and that was the next chapter. I thought, that you write only the beginning easy and with less sentences. It is really interesting to think about a story only written in this kind of telling.
Now, we can see the story out of James perspective. It is really, really short, but there is nothing I miss. You are an interesting and perfect author!
Love greetings
Traumfänger
and again, thank you for your comment :)
The parts probably get longer with time, the beginning is always the hardest while still trying to find a direction ^^°
Thank you so much! I hope you'll have a great day!
The parts probably get longer with time, the beginning is always the hardest while still trying to find a direction ^^°
Thank you so much! I hope you'll have a great day!
Hi,
I see this story before in my news, but I have so less time to read stories on animexx.
But... I felt in love with that cover and dare a look. My English skills are not really good, so I hope you understand my comments. Because I decide to train and read every lovely chapter of your story.
Never before I thought about this pairing. I forgot Sirius brother absolutely. ^^°
Your writing style is lovely and clear. I understand the most and the rest is obviously. You write in a way, I can imagine the young one training and be jealous very well. :)
And I love, that the chapters so short!
Now I am excited for the next chapter. I will read it after work in the subway.
Love greetings
Traumfänger
I see this story before in my news, but I have so less time to read stories on animexx.
But... I felt in love with that cover and dare a look. My English skills are not really good, so I hope you understand my comments. Because I decide to train and read every lovely chapter of your story.
Never before I thought about this pairing. I forgot Sirius brother absolutely. ^^°
Your writing style is lovely and clear. I understand the most and the rest is obviously. You write in a way, I can imagine the young one training and be jealous very well. :)
And I love, that the chapters so short!
Now I am excited for the next chapter. I will read it after work in the subway.
Love greetings
Traumfänger
Aww, thank you for your lovely comment!
My English isn't the best either, but reading and writing helps improving it and I feel very honoured that you want to read my fic aaaaah *happy noises*
I'm glad you liked the first part and that my writing is understandable!
Thank you for your comments <3
Greetings back ^-^
My English isn't the best either, but reading and writing helps improving it and I feel very honoured that you want to read my fic aaaaah *happy noises*
I'm glad you liked the first part and that my writing is understandable!
Thank you for your comments <3
Greetings back ^-^
